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[napman]

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I second that too

But since you asked for our opinions to make it better, so here are mine;
I think the main focal point should be at your guitar, not at your jeans I mean if you move your camcorder's eye up and closer to your guitar people will concentrate their attentions to the guitar!

It'd help to put some description at your YT so people have some ideas like what kind of guitar you played for this song, what kind of camcorder or digital cam or whatever you used.

And I personally don't think it's wrong to show your face a bit (not hiding it). I myself am very old and ugly as an old prune but I still am not afraid to show the whole world how ugly I am because I'm not gonna get any better look than yesterdays

Other than that I like your music, please do more recording and share with us again 'cause MUSIC is for sharing